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Writing Excuses 5.20: More Dialogue Exercises

From http://www.writingexcuses.com/2011/01/16/writing-excuses-5-20-more-dialog-exercises/

Key Points: Make sure characters have different personalities. A little banter goes a long way. Practice and good writing group comments can help. Think about how to evoke character and make it interesting. Beware narrative and description forced into dialogue. Keep the dialogue natural. Short, the way most people talk. Trust your readers to make connections, to put things together and figure out what is going on and why.
exercises by the listeners )
[Brandon] I'm going to read those. We'll just skip the writing prompt. I'm just going to end this by reading some Saberhagen. All right?
[Dan] OK. Nice.
[Brandon] Hear me, for I am Ardneh. Ardneh who rides the elephant, who wields the lightning, who rends fortifications as the rushing passage of time consumes cheap cloth. You slay me in this avatar, but I live on in other human beings. I am Ardneh, and in the end, I will slay thee, and thou wilt not live on.
Hear me, Ekuman. Neither by day nor by night will I slay thee. Neither with the blade nor with the bow... neither by the edge of the hand nor with the fist... neither with the wet nor with the dry.

The next line is him dying.
[Dan] Sweet. Talk about promises to the reader.
[Brandon] Yeah. There we are. This has been Writing Excuses. You're out of excuses, now go write.
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The news here in Japan recently had a short piece about a crime. They had video from one of the stores. Apparently the man with the white hat covering his face went up to a checkout counter in a department store or grocery, and asked to look at the ichi man en (10,000 yen) bills. I'm not sure whether he said he was looking at the numbers or looking for a nice crisp bill -- people here in Japan often want lucky numbers or crisp bills to pass out. Anyway, the cashier very helpfully got out a stack of bills -- each worth about $100 -- and handed it to him to look at! He ruffled through the stack, then gave it back to her. And pointed to something while she was putting them away. As she looked away, in the video, they circled his left hand dipping into his pocket to drop the bill that he had palmed.

Apparently he managed to get something like 50,000 yen during that visit to the store. And they warned us that they think it is a gang operating.

I sat and laughed. I thought about walking up to a cashier in America and telling them that I would like to look at the hundred dollar bills in their register. I'm reasonably certain that they would not hand me a stack of bills to look at. Indeed, I suspect I would find myself talking to security people or police very quickly.

There are times that the friendly, cooperative society here in Japan maybe leaves people just a bit too trusting?

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